Cool, crisp, life sustaining,

Frigid, sharp, oxygen containing,

Hot, stifling, strained,

Burning, smothering, pained,

Slowing, thinning, almost done,

Inhale, exhale ... none.

 

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Julia Ziebro (age 12)
My child is amazing.



April
1/12/2009 10:29:34 am

So impressive!!

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Granny
1/12/2009 05:11:15 pm

WOW

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Carolyn M.
1/13/2009 06:25:52 am

Totally amazing. That needs to be submitted somewhere for print.

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1/15/2009 07:25:53 am

Wow. That's incredibly good!

You'll definitely have to fan that flame.

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moxie
1/30/2009 06:48:15 am

just catching up on my reading so I am late responding...that is AMAZING. I love that girl!

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11/26/2010 04:02:49 pm

Wow an interesting article. Thank you for sharing.

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11/26/2010 04:14:52 pm

*The more you learn, the more you know.

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11/26/2010 04:19:47 pm

That which is striking and beautiful is not always good, but that which is good is always beautiful.*

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