Breaths

01/12/2009

8 Comments

 

Cool, crisp, life sustaining,

Frigid, sharp, oxygen containing,

Hot, stifling, strained,

Burning, smothering, pained,

Slowing, thinning, almost done,

Inhale, exhale ... none.

 

by  (wait for it ...)

 

 

 

 

 

 


 


 

Julia Ziebro (age 12)
My child is amazing.



 


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April
01/12/2009 18:29

So impressive!!

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Granny
01/13/2009 01:11

WOW

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Carolyn M.
01/13/2009 14:25

Totally amazing. That needs to be submitted somewhere for print.

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01/15/2009 15:25

Wow. That's incredibly good!

You'll definitely have to fan that flame.

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moxie
01/30/2009 14:48

just catching up on my reading so I am late responding...that is AMAZING. I love that girl!

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11/27/2010 00:02

Wow an interesting article. Thank you for sharing.

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11/27/2010 00:14

*The more you learn, the more you know.

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11/27/2010 00:19

That which is striking and beautiful is not always good, but that which is good is always beautiful.*

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